Bike— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Uh, yes, I had a back like 5 or 6 years old. I think back riding a bike is kind of interesting thing, even though I really ride, ride really, really fast, even sometimes so fast, you know?
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Uh, well, I don't think so. In fact, umm, in our country people usually write back, usually write backs. I don't think so. They usually drive car or buy buy food. They usually don't ride bags, although I think it's a good way to.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 48.0Sugestão: 回答切题，也提供了童年年龄和骑车感受，但“back”应为“bike”，“I had a bike like 5 or 6 years old”表达不自然，可说“when I was five or six”。注意“I think back riding”应改为“riding a bike”，并减少“ride”和“really”的重复。可用一句直接回答，再补充骑车的感受或具体场景。
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was about five or six years old. I loved riding it because it was exciting to go fast around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: 回答中的观点前后矛盾：先说自行车不流行，随后又说人们通常骑车。注意“write back”和“bags”应为“ride bikes”，“drive car”应为“drive cars”；“buy food”无法清楚说明人们为什么不骑车。建议先明确表达流行程度，再用一个具体原因支持观点，并避免重复“I don't think so”。
Exemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer to drive or take public transport, especially when they have to travel a long distance. However, some people still ride bikes for exercise or short trips.
Gramática
× I had a back like 5 or 6 years old.
✓ I had a bike when I was 5 or 6 years old.
原句中“like 5 or 6 years old”没有构成完整、自然的年龄时间表达。描述自己几岁时拥有某物，可以用“when I was 5 or 6 years old”。
× I think back riding a bike is kind of interesting thing, even though I really ride, ride really, really fast, even sometimes so fast, you know?
✓ I think riding a bike is an interesting thing, even though I rode really, really fast, sometimes even too fast.
“interesting thing”是单数可数名词短语，前面需要冠词；这里应为“an interesting thing”。另外，“back riding”应为“bike riding”（骑自行车），属于词语误识而非语法问题。
× I think back riding a bike is kind of interesting thing, even though I really ride, ride really, really fast, even sometimes so fast, you know?
✓ I think riding a bike is an interesting thing, even though I rode really, really fast, sometimes even too fast.
问题谈的是学生小时候的经历，因此描述当时骑车的动作应使用一般过去时“rode”，而不是一般现在时“ride”。
× They usually drive car or buy buy food.
✓ They usually drive cars or buy food.
这里是在泛指人们通常使用的交通方式，泛指可数名词“car”时应使用复数“cars”。“buy buy”是重复口误，整理时保留一次即可。
× They usually don't ride bags, although I think it's a good way to.
✓ They usually don't ride bikes, although I think riding a bike is a good way to get around.
“a good way to”后面需要接动词原形或完整的动词短语；原句没有说清楚“好方法是用来做什么”，因此句子结构不完整。可补充“get around”（出行）。“bags”应为“bikes”，这是词语误识，不属于所列语法问题。
'/%3e%3c/svg%3e)