Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答切题，但过去的经历要用过去时，应该说 “I had a bike”。删掉不必要的 “uh”，并补充一个具体细节，例如你通常在哪里骑车或骑车做什么。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题，并注意主谓一致和搭配：用 “bikes are popular in my country”，不要说 “among our country”；“China” 前不需要加 “our”。原因与骑车的联系不够清楚，“spare or traveled”也不自然。可以说明骑车方便、便宜或环保，并用一个具体场景举例。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially among students. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, so many students ride them to school or to nearby shops.

× To be honest, uh, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ To be honest, uh, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”明确表示过去，因此主句动词也要用过去时。“have”的过去式是“had”。

× Yes, bike are very popular among our country because our China has lots of young people.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular among our country because our China has lots of young people.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。

× Yes, bike are very popular among our country because our China has lots of young people.

✓ Yes, bike are very popular in our country because our China has lots of young people.

“among”通常表示“在多个群体或个体之中”，不适合搭配“country”。表达“在我国”应使用“in our country”。

× They have enough time to spare or traveled.

✓ They have enough time to spare or travel.

“spare”和“travel”由“or”连接，形式应保持平行。这里“to”可以同时支配两个动词，因此应使用动词原形“travel”，不能使用过去式“traveled”。

× For example, many, uh, many students use their bike.

✓ For example, many, uh, many students use their bikes.

“many students”表示多个学生，通常对应多个学生各自的自行车，因此“bike”应使用复数“bikes”。