Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答“有”或“没有”，再补充一两个具体细节。注意过去的经历要用过去时，例如用“had”和“rode”；描述车子时可说“a blue aluminium bike”，而不是“this blue is made in the aluminum”。表达尽量简洁，避免重复或不自然的开头。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a blue aluminium bike when I was a child. It was a lovely bike, and I often rode it around the yard with my friends.

Sugestão: 先清楚表明自行车现在是否受欢迎，并区分自行车与电动车。可用“less popular than they used to be”表达“没有以前那么流行”，再说明电动滑板车和电动摩托车更常见。注意主谓一致、冠词和时态，例如说“bicycles are”以及“people used to ride”；删去重复的“drive driving”等表达。

Exemplo: I think bicycles are less popular in China than they used to be. When I was younger, many people rode them, but nowadays electric scooters and e-motorcycles are much more common because they are convenient for getting around.

× I do have back when I was a child

✓ I had one back when I was a child.

这句话描述的是童年时拥有自行车的经历，应使用过去时 had，而不是现在时 do have。

× it's very nice bike

✓ It was a very nice bike.

单数可数名词 bike 前需要使用不定冠词 a。

× it's very nice bike

✓ It was a very nice bike.

这里是在描述童年时的自行车，因此应使用过去时 was，而不是现在时 is。

× this blue is made in the aluminum

✓ It was blue and made of aluminum.

原句中的 this blue 不能自然地表达“它是蓝色的”，需要用 It was blue。将颜色和材质并列时，可使用 and 连接。

× made in the aluminum

✓ made of aluminum

表示某物由某种材料制成时，通常使用 made of；aluminum 前不需要 the。

× I also ride my bike with my mates in the yard.

✓ I also rode my bike with my mates in the yard.

这句话讲的是童年时的经历，动词 ride 应改为过去式 rode。

× bike is not probably in China

✓ Bikes are probably not popular in China.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数 Bikes，并搭配 are。

× bike is not probably in China

✓ Bikes are probably not popular in China.

probably 通常放在 be 动词之后、否定词 not 之前。调整后语序为 are probably not。

× bike is not probably in China

✓ Bikes are probably not popular in China.

原句缺少表达“受欢迎”的形容词 popular，导致句意和结构不完整。

× because China we had a lot of the motorcycles and the EV scooters

✓ because in China we have a lot of motorcycles and e-scooters

表达“在中国”时应使用介词 in，放在 China 前面。

× because China we had a lot of the motorcycles and the EV scooters

✓ because in China we have a lot of motorcycles and e-scooters

这里是在说明中国目前的情况，应使用现在时 have，而不是过去时 had。

× a lot of the motorcycles and the EV scooters

✓ a lot of motorcycles and e-scooters

这里是泛指许多摩托车和电动滑板车，并非特指某一群，因此不需要使用定冠词 the。

× So when I was young and a lot of people used to drive bikes, bicycles, but now they just drive driving the e-scooters and the even the e-moto.

✓ When I was young, a lot of people used to drive bicycles, but now they just drive e-scooters and even e-motorcycles.

when 引导时间状语从句后，主句应直接接 a lot of people；此处的 and 多余。后面的 but 已经用于对比，不需要在前面再用 and 连接。

× they just drive driving the e-scooters

✓ they just drive e-scooters

情态副词 just 后面直接接谓语动词 drive；原句中的 driving 多余，不应重复使用动词形式。

× the even the e-moto

✓ even e-motorcycles

even 应放在它强调的名词短语前面；此处不应在 even 前后重复使用 the。