Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Répondez directement, puis ajoutez un détail précis. Évitez la répétition entre « when I was a child » et « back when I was a child ». Il faut aussi dire « a great bike » et préciser, par exemple, où vous l’utilisiez ou ce que vous aimiez faire avec.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a bright red mountain bike, and I loved riding it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

Sugestão: Votre réponse est directe, mais elle est trop courte pour développer votre idée. Ajoutez une raison ou un exemple concret, comme les pistes cyclables, les trajets quotidiens ou les loisirs, et utilisez un connecteur pour relier vos idées.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them to commute because they are affordable and convenient, and some also ride them for exercise at the weekend.

× Yes, I had it back when I was a child and it was already great bike and I really enjoyed it.

✓ Yes, I had it back when I was a child, and it was already a great bike. I really enjoyed it.

The singular countable noun phrase great bike needs an article. Use a before great bike because it refers to one bike and is not a specific bike already identified in this clause.