Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充用途和原因。注意说“when I was a child”，过去式“rode”，以及“walking”（步行），而不是“road”和“working”。避免重复使用“because”，并将原因表达清楚。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school every day because the school was nearby, and cycling was faster than walking.

Sugestão: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎。原回答中的“my country is very big girl”以及“go to the Mudidi”意思不清晰；请使用简单、准确的词语说明人们骑车的原因，并补充一个具体场景。避免停顿词过多，并用完整句子结束回答。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people ride them to work or to the market because they are convenient and inexpensive.

× When I was child, I used to road my bike, go to school every day because Because the school was nearby and it was near faster than working.

✓ When I was a child, I used to road my bike, go to school every day because Because the school was nearby and it was near faster than working.

child 是单数可数名词，前面需要加冠词。这里应使用不定冠词 a，改为 a child。

× When I was child, I used to road my bike, go to school every day because Because the school was nearby and it was near faster than working.

✓ When I was child, I used to ride my bike to school every day because Because the school was nearby and it was near faster than working.

used to 后面应接动词原形，因此应说 used to ride，而不是 used to road。另外，ride my bike to school 能清楚表达“骑车去学校”。

× When I was child, I used to road my bike, go to school every day because Because the school was nearby and it was near faster than working.

✓ When I was child, I used to road my bike, go to school every day because Because the school was nearby and it was much faster than walking.

near 不能用来修饰比较级 faster。表达“快得多”时，可以在 faster 前使用 much。结合骑车上学的语境，比较对象通常应是 walking（走路）。

× If you everyone mmm buy bikes, go to the Mudidi, it's very convenient because

✓ If everyone buys bikes, going to the Mudidi is very convenient because

everyone 虽然表示“每个人”，但语法上是单数，因此一般现在时的动词要加 -s，应使用 buys。这里把 going to the Mudidi 作为句子的主语时，谓语也要用单数形式 is。原句以 because 结尾，后面的原因没有说完；请补充原因或删去 because。