Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, when I was a child I do had a bike and I really vividly remember when my father taught me how to ride a bike, so I always remember it with a smile.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

In my country bikes aren't that popular because we don't have that much bike roads and it's pretty hard to write it carefully.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题,例如“Yes, I did.”。描述过去的经历时使用过去式,不能说“do had”;“vividly remember”和“always remember”意思重复,可以删去一个。可保留父亲教你骑车这一具体细节,让回答更自然、简洁。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I vividly remember my father teaching me how to ride, and I still smile when I think about it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 先明确回答自行车是否流行,再说明原因。“bike roads”建议改为“bike lanes”或“cycling paths”;“write it”应为“ride them”。注意“roads”是可数名词,可说“many bike lanes”。可以具体说明道路设施不足如何影响骑行。

Exemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. There aren't many bike lanes, so people may find it difficult or unsafe to ride around.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, when I was a child I do had a bike and I really vividly remember when my father taught me how to ride a bike, so I always remember it with a smile.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike, and I really vividly remember when my father taught me how to ride a bike, so I always remember it with a smile.

句子描述的是童年时拥有自行车这件过去的事情,应使用一般过去时。这里的“do had”结构错误:过去时动词“had”前不需要再加“do”。应直接说“ I had a bike”。

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers(量词使用错误)

× In my country bikes aren't that popular because we don't have that much bike roads and it's pretty hard to write it carefully.

✓ In my country bikes aren't that popular because we don't have that many bike roads and it's pretty hard to write it carefully.

“Roads”是可数名词复数,表示数量少时应使用“many”,而不是用于不可数名词的“much”。因此应说“that many bike roads”。

Vocabulário

Hard— Firm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Pretty— Attractive; Quite; Beautify
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