Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题，再用一到两个完整理由补充。你的回答后半部分没有说完，且“learn to pick up this skill”表达不自然；可以说“learn to ride a bike”。“my family member they had a car”有主语重复的问题。建议删去犹豫词和未完成的内容，并说明家人开车如何影响你骑车的需要。

Exemplo: No, I didn’t. I was a little afraid of learning to ride a bike, and my family already had a car. My mum usually drove me to school, so I didn’t really need a bike.

Sugestão: 观点明确，但“from what I know, from what I observed”意思重复，且“The bike, most of our people”句子结构不完整。注意说“people rely”，不要说“people are heavily rely”；“commute to work or school”比列举“office, company”更自然。最后一句没有完成，可以用“because they are affordable”解释原因，并在两三句内收尾。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they’re affordable and convenient, especially for short journeys. They can also help people avoid traffic jams.

× And also because my family member they had a car they so they every time I come into my school my mom uh

✓ Also, my family members had a car, so they drove me to school every day.

原句有重复主语（“my family member they”）、重复连接词和未完成的结构，导致句子不完整、意思不清。可以去掉重复部分，并将原因和结果用“so”连接。

× Of course, from what I know, from what I observed, the bike, most of our people, they're heavily rely on the bike to commute to their s- office, their company or uh their or or school.

✓ Of course. From what I know and have observed, most people in my country rely on bikes to commute to their offices, workplaces, or schools.

这里是在泛指人们使用自行车通勤，因此应使用复数“bikes”。“office”和“school”也应使用复数形式，与泛指的“most people”及多种通勤目的地相匹配。

× Of course, from what I know, from what I observed, the bike, most of our people, they're heavily rely on the bike to commute to their s- office, their company or uh their or or school.

✓ Of course. From what I know and have observed, most people in my country rely heavily on bikes to commute to their offices, workplaces, or schools.

“they're heavily rely”结构错误：“they're”后不能直接接动词原形“rely”。这里用一般现在时表达普遍情况，应写成“they rely”。另外，原句中“the bike”等重复和插入语过多，使句子结构不清晰。

× It's like affordable. That I ever almost everyone could

✓ Bikes are affordable, so almost everyone can afford one.

“That I ever almost everyone could”不是完整句子，缺少清楚的句子结构；“It's like affordable”也不符合这里要表达的意思。可以用“so”连接结果，并用“can afford one”表达“几乎每个人都买得起一辆”。原文谈的是普遍情况，因此使用“can”比过去式“could”更合适。