Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答“没有”，再说明你小时候更喜欢步行。注意使用过去时：描述童年习惯时用“preferred”，而不是“prefer”；“骑自行车”说“ride a bike”，“步行”说“go on foot”或“walk”。避免重复和过多填充词，并确保回答意思清楚。

Exemplo: Not really. I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I preferred walking. I lived close to school, so walking was convenient.

Sugestão: 回答方向正确，但表达有重复，填充词较多，后半部分“对大多数人来说容易学”不够清楚。可以先明确说自行车很受欢迎，再用一两个具体理由支持观点，例如方便短途出行、容易学或有助于锻炼。注意说“bikes are popular”和“most people”，并用“also”连接补充理由。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re convenient for short trips, especially in busy cities. Also, most people find them easy to learn to ride, and cycling is a good way to exercise.

× I prefer to on foot.

✓ I preferred to walk.

这句话描述的是小时候的情况，前文使用了过去时（when I was a little girl），所以这里的 prefer 也应使用过去式 preferred。此外，表达“步行”时可以用 walk，或说 go on foot；不能说 to on foot。

× I prefer to on foot.

✓ I preferred to walk.

to 后面需要接动词原形，但 on foot 是介词短语，不是动词。可以改为 to walk；也可以说 to go on foot。描述过去的习惯时应使用 preferred。

× Yes, I think the bikes are popular in my country because it is very convenient to uh have a bike, ride a bike, uh, and uh and uh it's also like easier stuff for most of people they learn.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because it is very convenient to have a bike, and it is also easier for most people to learn.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，不是指特定的几辆自行车，因此复数名词 bikes 前通常不加定冠词 the。泛指时应说 Bikes are popular。

× Yes, I think the bikes are popular in my country because it is very convenient to uh have a bike, ride a bike, uh, and uh and uh it's also like easier stuff for most of people they learn.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because it is very convenient to have a bike, and it is also easier for most people to learn.

most 后直接接泛指的复数名词时，不需要加 of，因此应说 most people。若使用 most of，则需要特指范围，例如 most of the people。

× Yes, I think the bikes are popular in my country because it is very convenient to uh have a bike, ride a bike, uh, and uh and uh it's also like easier stuff for most of people they learn.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because it is very convenient to have a bike, and it is also easier for most people to learn.

原句后半部分 “it's also like easier stuff for most of people they learn” 结构不完整，尤其是 they learn 与前面的 for most of people 衔接不当。可以用 “it is easier for someone to do something” 这一结构，改为 “it is easier for most people to learn”。