Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题，再用一两句补充具体经历。注意使用正确的词汇“bike”，并保持过去时一致：描述童年经历时用“rode”，不要用现在时“ride”。“I had a ride by school”表达不自然，可以说“I had a bike when I was ten”。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was ten, and I used to ride it to school. I also rode it to my friend's house after school.

Sugestão: 回答目前没有完成，而且观点与理由有些矛盾：如果很多人每天骑电动自行车，就可以说明自行车（尤其是电动自行车）很受欢迎。先明确回答，再说明中国城市居民常用电动自行车通勤，并减少“uh”等填充词。“most of people”应改为“most people”，“electronical bike”应改为“electric bikes”。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially electric bikes. Many people use them for their daily commute because they are convenient and cheaper to run than cars. They are also useful in crowded cities.

× I had a ride by school when I was 10.

✓ I had a ride at school when I was 10.

表示在学校这个地点时，通常用介词“at”，而不是“by”。

× I ride aid from my home to my school and I always write it aid to my friend's home.

✓ I rode it from my home to my school, and I always rode it to my friend's home.

这段话描述的是童年时的经历，应使用过去时。“ride”的过去式是“rode”；“write”在这里应为“ride”，其过去式同样是“rode”。

× Uh, actually not. Uh, because in my country, China, uh, there is, uh, most of people, uh ride electronical bike in their daily life uh and uh

✓ Actually, not really. In my country, China, most people ride electric bikes in their daily lives.

原句中的“there is”后面没有接合适的主语，且后文已有“most people”作主语，因此应删除“there is”，直接说“most people ride...”。

× Uh, actually not. Uh, because in my country, China, uh, there is, uh, most of people, uh ride electronical bike in their daily life uh and uh

✓ Actually, not really. In my country, China, most people ride electric bikes in their daily lives.

泛指“大多数人”时，直接使用“most people”，不说“most of people”。若使用“most of”，后面通常要有定冠词或限定词，例如“most of the people”。

× Uh, actually not. Uh, because in my country, China, uh, there is, uh, most of people, uh ride electronical bike in their daily life uh and uh

✓ Actually, not really. In my country, China, most people ride electric bikes in their daily lives.

这里泛指人们日常骑的自行车，复数形式“bikes”更合适；“most people”也是复数含义，因此用“their daily lives”与之保持一致。

× Uh, actually not. Uh, because in my country, China, uh, there is, uh, most of people, uh ride electronical bike in their daily life uh and uh

✓ Actually, not really. In my country, China, most people ride electric bikes in their daily lives.

修饰“bikes”表示“电动的”时，应使用形容词“electric”，而不是“electronical”。