Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答是否有自行车；表达“骑自行车”应使用“ride a bike”，而不是“bike”。避免重复和中途改口。“买不起”可以说“couldn't afford one”，不要说“couldn't offer the one”。补充一个具体细节，例如后来是否有机会骑朋友的自行车。

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. I sometimes borrowed a friend's bike, though.

Sugestão: 回答应围绕“在你的国家是否流行”，不要转而说“在我的家庭里”。可用“bicycles are popular”直接作答，再用价格便宜、便于短途出行等理由支持观点。将“没有排放废气”表达为“don't produce exhaust fumes”，并删去重复的“afford”。

Exemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. They're affordable and don't produce exhaust fumes, so many people use them for short trips.

× I couldn't I will bike because my family was poor.

✓ I couldn't ride a bike because my family was poor.

“couldn’t”和“will”不能这样连续用于同一个动词结构中。句子描述的是过去的情况，应使用“couldn’t + 动词原形”。可以说“I couldn’t ride a bike”。

× We couldn't offer the one.

✓ We couldn't offer one.

这里的“one”泛指一辆自行车，前面没有提到某一辆特定的自行车，因此不应使用定冠词“the”。泛指时直接说“one”。

× Afford them and they can afford.

✓ They can afford one.

原句后半部分“They can afford”中的“afford”后面缺少宾语，句子不完整；前面的“Afford them”也与上下文连接不清。表达“他们买得起一辆”时，可说“They can afford one”。