Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly, then add one or two relevant details. Use the past tense consistently: say “I owned” rather than “I own.” Check the wording “a tricycle” if you mean a three-wheeled bike, and avoid the awkward phrase “with which is a type of a bicycle.” Use a natural expression such as “I really enjoyed riding it.”

Exemplo: Yes, I had a small tricycle when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my fifth birthday, and I loved riding it around our yard.

Sugestão: Give a clear opening answer and explain the main uses of bikes without repeating “a lot” or “used for daily use.” Replace “commuter ones” with a more natural phrase such as “commuter bikes,” and connect the contrast between everyday and recreational bikes with a linking word such as “while.”

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially commuter bikes, because many people use them to get to work or school. There are also off-road bikes, which are popular with people who enjoy adventure and outdoor activities.

× Uh, in my childhood I own a tribike with which is a type of a bicycle and my parent gifted me that on my fifth birthday and I enjoyed a lot by riding that bike.

✓ Uh, in my childhood I owned a tribike, which is a type of bicycle, and my parent gifted it to me on my fifth birthday. I enjoyed riding it a lot.

The question asks about your childhood, so use the past-tense form owned instead of own. Keep the other past-tense verb gifted consistent with this time frame.

× Uh, in my childhood I own a tribike with which is a type of a bicycle and my parent gifted me that on my fifth birthday and I enjoyed a lot by riding that bike.

✓ Uh, in my childhood I owned a tribike, which is a type of bicycle, and my parent gifted it to me on my fifth birthday. I enjoyed riding it a lot.

The phrase with which is a type of a bicycle does not form a grammatical relative clause. Use which is a type of bicycle to describe the tribike. Also, say enjoyed riding it a lot; this gives enjoyed its object and uses the natural enjoy + gerund structure. For a clearer sentence, separate the ideas instead of joining them all with and.

× Yes, there are a lot of bikes which are popular in my country, mostly the commuter ones, uh, which are used for daily use, uh, by the public, and some types of bikes are made for the off-roading and for adventure.

✓ Yes, a lot of bikes are popular in my country, mostly commuter bikes, which are used for daily transportation by the public. Some types of bikes are made for off-roading and adventure.

Do not use the before off-roading when referring to the activity in general. Use off-roading without an article. The correction also removes the unnecessary article before commuter bikes, where the speaker is referring to commuter bikes generally.