Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答“有”，并使用过去时：用“did have”或“had”，不要用“have”。修正“when I was a little two children”等不自然表达；如果指的是自行车，应说妈妈送了你一辆自行车，而不是“a bag”。后续用一两个具体细节说明你骑车做什么，并使用过去时，例如“rode”。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was in primary school, and my mum gave it to me for my birthday. I often rode it to the park with my friends.

Sugestão: 直接回答后，用具体且自然的理由展开。注意“bikes”是复数泛指；“every child”后接单数动词；避免重复“like to like”，并将“bike bag”改为“bike”。表达城市交通拥挤时，可说骑自行车上下学或通勤更方便。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people ride them to school or work because the roads are often crowded. They’re also a convenient and affordable way to get around.

× Definitely I have a bike when I was a little two ch children.

✓ Definitely, I had a bike when I was a little child.

这句话描述的是童年时的经历，应使用一般过去时。have 应改为 had。另外，“a little two ch children”结构不正确；这里表达“小时候”可说 “when I was a little child”。

× My mom sent me a bag for my birthday gift, and I always use it with my friends to go to park, to go shopping.

✓ My mom sent me a bag for my birthday, and I always used it with my friends to go to the park and go shopping.

这段内容承接童年经历，因此描述过去经常做的事时，use 应改为 used。

× I always use it with my friends to go to park.

✓ I always used it with my friends to go to the park.

park 是可数名词单数，此处指去公园，通常需要加定冠词 the。

× I think bike is very popular.

✓ I think bikes are very popular.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数 bikes；相应地，谓语也应使用 are。

× Every children, especially boys, like to like bike.

✓ Every child, especially boys, likes riding bikes.

every 后面应接可数名词单数，因此 children 应改为 child。泛指自行车时应使用复数 bikes。

× Every children, especially boys, like to like bike.

✓ Every child, especially boys, likes riding bikes.

句子的主语核心是 every child，属于第三人称单数，因此谓语应使用 likes，而不是 like。

× If you are in a big cities.

✓ If you are in a big city.

a 后面应接单数可数名词，因此 cities 应改为 city。

× You should to have your own bike bag.

✓ You should have your own bike bag.

情态动词 should 后面应直接接动词原形，不加 to。因此应说 should have。