Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 질문에 직접 답했지만, “Yes”만으로는 답변이 너무 짧아 내용을 충분히 전달하지 못합니다. 어린 시절 자전거를 탔는지, 어떤 자전거였는지 또는 어디에서 탔는지 한두 가지 구체적인 세부사항을 덧붙이세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Sugestão: 질문은 현재 자전거의 인기를 묻고 있으므로 현재 시제로 명확하게 답하세요. “the now generations”와 “a little bit is population is decreased”는 부자연스럽고 의미가 불분명합니다. 전기 자전거와 스쿠터의 인기가 높아졌다는 점을 중심으로 비교하고, 이유나 구체적인 관찰을 한 가지 덧붙이세요. 반복되는 “now”도 줄이세요.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, especially in cities with good cycling paths. However, many people now prefer electric bikes or scooters because they make commuting easier.

× It was popular when I was child.

✓ Bikes were popular when I was a child.

The question refers to bikes, which is plural, so use the plural noun Bikes and the plural verb were rather than It was. Also, child is a singular countable noun and needs an article: a child.

× I was child.

✓ I was a child.

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article a in this sentence.

× A little bit is population is decreased.

✓ Their popularity has decreased a little.

Decrease is used here as an intransitive verb, so it should not be in the passive form is decreased. Use has decreased to describe a change that has happened and matters now. Their popularity also makes the intended subject clear.

× People want more riding and electronic.

✓ People want to ride more and use electric bikes.

The original phrase does not form a clear, parallel structure: riding is a gerund, while electronic is an adjective without a noun. Use parallel verb phrases, to ride more and use electric bikes.