Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答，再用一两句补充具体细节。表达“我记得它叫……”时可说“ I remember it was called…”，而不是“in my memories”。“can”后要接动词原形；如果想表达过去的能力，可用“could”。建议说明你如何学骑车或这辆车的特点，并避免加入不清楚的表达。注意过去经历的时态一致。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a bike called Boma, and I remember it very fondly. It took me a while to learn how to ride it, but I was excited when I finally managed to ride on my own.

Sugestão: 回答切题，也提到了自行车便宜、方便的原因，但需要把过去和现在的时态区分清楚：“when I was a child”后用过去时，如“bikes were inexpensive”；“liked to”后接动词原形“ride”。“all the people”过于绝对，可改为“many people”。最后的“But now?”不完整；可以补充一句说明现在自行车是否仍然受欢迎，并给出具体原因。注意地点表达应为“to school”或“to work”。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, although they were even more common when I was a child. Back then, they were inexpensive and convenient, so many people rode them to school, work, or the park. These days, some people prefer cars or public transport, but cycling remains popular for exercise and short trips.

× Yes I did and in my memories the bike is named Boma and it can failed.

✓ Yes, I did. In my memories, the bike was named Boma, and it can failed.

问题句回忆的是童年时的自行车，因此“is named”应改为过去时“was named”。

× Yes I did and in my memories the bike is named Boma and it can failed.

✓ Yes, I did. In my memories, the bike is named Boma, and it can fail.

情态动词“can”后面必须接动词原形，不能接过去式“failed”。因此应改为“can fail”。

× So I really like it and I spent a lot of time to learn how to ride a bike.

✓ So I really like it, and I spent a lot of time learning how to ride a bike.

“spend time”后面接动词时，通常使用动词-ing形式。因此“to learn”应改为“learning”。

× It is so popular in my country because at that time the bike is inexpensive and convenient.

✓ It was so popular in my country because at that time the bike was inexpensive and convenient.

“at that time”指过去的时间，因此描述当时受欢迎以及自行车的价格和便利性时，应使用过去时“was”，而不是现在时“is”。

× So all the people liked to rode a bike, go to the school, go to the workplaces or go to the park.

✓ So all the people liked to ride a bike, go to the school, go to the workplaces or go to the park.

这里“to”引导不定式，后面应接动词原形。“rode”是过去式，应改为原形“ride”。