Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你直接回答了问题，也补充了骑车去河边的经历，但有较多语法和用词错误。注意过去时应说“when I was a child”，描述过去的习惯可说“I usually rode”；“nearby river”比“nearly river”合适。避免重复“and”，并将最后一句改为过去时，使时态一致。可以补充河边景色或骑车带给你的感受，让细节更具体。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to a nearby river to enjoy the sandy banks. I found those rides relaxing, especially on sunny afternoons.

Sugestão: 你表达了明确观点，并尝试说明原因，但“when going out”后的时态应改为现在时“choose”；“the only use of bags”与题意不符，应该是“bikes are mainly used”。建议说明人们为何选择汽车或地铁，并用一个连接词自然引出自行车的用途。注意不要把“bikes”误说成“bags”。

Exemplo: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people choose cars or the underground when they travel, as these options are more convenient for longer journeys. However, people still use bikes for exercise or short trips.

× Yes, I had a bike when I were was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

主语是第一人称单数“I”，过去时be动词应使用“was”，不能用“were”。同时应删除重复的“were”。

× I usually riding the bike to the nearly river and and to see the sands around the river.

✓ I usually rode my bike to the nearby river to see the sand around it.

这句话描述的是童年时的习惯，应用过去时。“usually riding”不是完整的谓语结构，此处应改为过去式“usually rode”。描述过去的习惯时，可使用“usually + 动词过去式”。

× I usually riding the bike to the nearly river and and to see the sands around the river.

✓ I usually rode my bike to the nearby river to see the sand around it.

“river”是名词，前面需要形容词修饰。“nearly”是副词，不能这样修饰名词；应使用形容词“nearby”，表示“附近的”。

× I usually riding the bike to the nearly river and and to see the sands around the river.

✓ I usually rode my bike to the nearby river to see the sand around it.

“and”被重复使用。此处“to see...”表示骑车去河边的目的，直接接在“rode my bike to the nearby river”后即可，不需要再加“and”。

× I usually riding the bike to the nearly river and and to see the sands around the river.

✓ I usually rode my bike to the nearby river to see the sand around it.

这里的“sand”指河边的沙，是不可数名词，通常不用复数形式“sands”。表示沙这种物质时，使用“sand”。

× It makes me relax.

✓ It made me relax.

上下文描述的是学生小时候骑车的经历，因此应使用过去时。“make”的过去式是“made”。

× Honestly, bikes are not popular in my country because when going out, most people chose cars or underground trains.

✓ Honestly, bikes are not popular in my country because when going out, most people choose cars or underground trains.

这句话描述的是当前普遍存在的情况，应使用一般现在时。“most people”是复数主语，谓语使用动词原形“choose”，而不是过去式“chose”。