Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời chưa trực tiếp nói rõ bạn có xe đạp hay không; hãy trả lời “Yes, I did” hoặc “No, I didn’t” trước. “In my conscience” không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này, và câu trả lời chuyển sang nói chung về mọi người thay vì trải nghiệm của bạn. Dùng thì quá khứ cho trải nghiệm thời thơ ấu, chẳng hạn “when I was five”, và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể như ai đã dạy bạn hoặc bạn thường đi xe ở đâu.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small bike when I was about five, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm, nhưng cần sửa sự hòa hợp giữa chủ ngữ và danh từ: dùng “bicycles are” hoặc “a bicycle is”, và “one of the most popular vehicles”. Câu giải thích thứ hai hiện khó hiểu; hãy nói rõ nhóm người thường đi xe đạp và lý do, ví dụ học sinh dùng xe để đến trường. Có thể nối ý bằng “for example” hoặc “especially”.

Exemplo: Definitely. Bicycles are one of the most popular ways to get around in my country. Many primary and secondary school students ride them to school because they’re affordable and convenient.

× Yes, in my conscience people always practice for their child to use things how to ride bikes when they was a child.

✓ Yes, I think people usually teach their children how to ride bikes when they are young.

The plural subject they must take the plural verb were, not was. The sentence has been rephrased to express the general idea clearly; use a plural noun after their when referring to people in general.

× Uh, such as three years old more.

✓ Children often start learning to ride bikes at around three years old.

The original is a fragment because it has no main verb. Make it a complete clause by adding a subject and a verb. Use at around to express an approximate age.

× Definitely yes, bike is the one of the most popular vehicle in my country.

✓ Definitely. Bikes are among the most popular vehicles in my country.

The sentence refers to bikes and vehicles in general, so use the plural forms bikes and vehicles. Plural subjects also take are.

× Definitely yes, bike is the one of the most popular vehicle in my country.

✓ Definitely. Bikes are among the most popular vehicles in my country.

The phrase the one of is not the correct structure here. Use one of the most popular vehicles or, as in the correction, among the most popular vehicles.

× Pupils from people's lives almost use the most, such as a child who start who study secondary or primary school opportunities almost riding by to go to school.

✓ Most pupils, especially children in primary or secondary school, use bikes to get to school.

The original sentence combines incomplete and disconnected clauses, so its meaning is difficult to follow. Organize the idea around a clear subject and verb, and use a concise phrase to explain which pupils you mean.

× Pupils from people's lives almost use the most, such as a child who start who study secondary or primary school opportunities almost riding by to go to school.

✓ Most pupils, especially children in primary or secondary school, use bikes to get to school.

In the original relative clause, the singular subject child requires the verb starts, not start. The correction uses the plural noun children, so the sentence structure has also been simplified.