Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充是谁送的以及它带来的便利。“back when I was a child”与前面的“when you were a child”重复；“The back was sent”应改成“The bike was given to me”，而且小孩子通常是骑车去上学或和朋友玩，不是去工作。注意使用“ride a bike”和复数“friends”等自然表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My mother gave me a bike when I was about eight and taught me how to ride it. I used to ride it to school and around my neighborhood with my friends.

Sugestão: 回答时要围绕题目中的“bikes”，不要误说成“bags”；这会让答案偏离问题。可以说明自行车为什么受欢迎，并用共享单车作为具体例子。将“a convenient and green type for go out”改为“a convenient and environmentally friendly way to get around”，同时删去重复且不通顺的“going out and in in of public areas”。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. They’re a convenient and environmentally friendly way to get around. There are also plenty of shared bikes near public places and subway stations.

× Uh, it is a convenient and green type for go out.

✓ Uh, it is a convenient and green type for going out.

介词“for”后面接动词时，动词通常使用-ing形式。因此应将“go”改为“going”。也可以改用不定式表达目的：“a convenient and green way to go out”。

× For going out and in in of public areas there are many shared bags.

✓ For going in and out of public areas, there are many shared bags.

“in in of”中的介词重复且搭配错误。表示“进出某个地方”时，可以使用“go in and out of + 地点”。因此应改为“going in and out of public areas”。