Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
No, I didn't have a bike when I were a child because when I was a kid I like running and jumping instead of riding a bike.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
I think bikes are obviously popular in my country. Every day when I go to work I see many bikes on the road and people are willing to use the shared bikes now.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 66.0Sugestão: 回答直接,也给出了原因,但有两处明显的时态/语法错误:“I were”应改为“I was”,“I like”应改为“I liked”。此外,“when I were a child”和“when I was a kid”意思重复,可以删去其中一个,让回答更简洁自然。
Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. I preferred running and jumping, so I never really felt the need for one.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 78.0Sugestão: 回答立场清楚,并用通勤观察和共享单车补充了细节。可以把“obviously”换成更自然的“quite”或“very”,因为“obviously”在这里略显生硬;“people are willing to use”也不够地道,可改为“many people use”。建议用“for example”连接具体例子,并说明共享单车为何受欢迎。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I see plenty of them on the roads during my daily commute, and many people use shared bikes because they’re convenient for short trips.
× I didn't have a bike when I were a child
✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child
主语“I”是第一人称单数,be动词的过去式应使用“was”,不能使用“were”。建议记住过去式 be 动词的搭配:I/he/she/it 用 was,you/we/they 用 were。
× when I was a kid I like running and jumping instead of riding a bike
✓ when I was a kid I liked running and jumping instead of riding a bike
这里描述的是“小时候”的习惯或喜好,时间背景是过去,因此应将一般现在时“like”改为一般过去时“liked”。建议根据句中的过去时间背景统一使用过去时。