Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答切题，也提到了学骑车的经历，但要注意时态：讲童年经历时用过去时，例如 “I had” 和 “it was difficult”。避免重复 “actually”“because” 以及句中断句；用一两个具体细节说明练习过程，并以简洁的结果收尾。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was difficult to learn at first, so I practised in the park with my father. After a few weeks, I could ride it confidently.

Sugestão: 先直接回答自行车是否流行，并说明你所指的情况或人群。避免在 “because” 后接 “and”；注意主谓和名词形式，例如用 “people drive cars”。再补充一个具体原因或对比，让观点更清楚。

Exemplo: I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They are affordable and convenient for short trips, although many people in large cities prefer to drive because of the long distances.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

这句话描述的是童年时的经历，应用过去时。将 have 改为 had。

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

child 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里应说 a child。

× I think it is difficult first because I have many difficulties and I should practice again and again.

✓ I think it was difficult at first because I had many difficulties and I should practice again and again.

这里讲述过去学骑车的经历，因此描述当时的困难应使用过去时：is 改为 was，have 改为 had。

× I think it is difficult first because I have many difficulties and I should practice again and again.

✓ I think it is difficult at first because I have many difficulties and I should practice again and again.

表示“起初、刚开始时”应使用固定表达 at first，不能只说 first。

× I think it's not very popular because and everyone may drive car often.

✓ I think it's not very popular because everyone may drive a car often.

because 已经引导原因从句，后面不应再接 and。删除 and，使句子的连接关系清楚。

× I think it's not very popular because and everyone may drive car often.

✓ I think it's not very popular because everyone may drive a car often.

car 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。此处应说 a car。