Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly by saying whether you had a bike as a child. Your response shifts to your current plans and does not clearly answer the question. Use a short topic sentence, then add one relevant detail, such as who you rode with or where you rode. Avoid fillers and unfinished phrases, and use a clear expression such as “after the road construction is finished.”

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I used to borrow one from my cousin occasionally, and we would ride around our neighborhood.

Sugestão: Give a clear yes-or-no answer first, then explain why bikes and other two-wheelers are popular. Avoid repeating “bikes and the two-wheelers,” and replace unclear phrases such as “most of the near please” with a specific reason or example. Use linking words such as “because” or “for example,” and check subject–verb agreement.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes and other two-wheelers are very popular in my country. They are more affordable than cars and are easier to use in crowded cities. For example, many people ride scooters to work or to nearby shops.

× And also will, uh, inter uh, at the moment also I do want to ride a bike, but because of the ongoing road construction, uh, in the Jabba, I'm planning on buying it after, uh, the construction gets complete and the route and when the work condition is.

✓ At the moment, I also want to ride a bike, but because of the ongoing road construction in Jabba, I'm planning to buy one after the construction is complete and the road conditions improve.

The original sentence ends with the incomplete and confusing phrase and the route and when the work condition is. This creates an unfinished, poorly connected clause. Connect the reason for delaying the purchase to a complete condition, such as when the construction is finished and the road conditions improve.

× Cause according to the transportation car are most mostly expensive and most of the near please.

✓ Because cars are mostly expensive, ...

Car refers to vehicles in general here, so it should be plural: cars. The transcript after and most of the near please is unclear, so it cannot be corrected reliably without guessing the intended meaning.

× Cause according to the transportation car are most mostly expensive and most of the near please.

✓ Because cars are mostly expensive, ...

Most mostly is redundant and incorrect in this context. Use mostly, an adverb meaning generally or for the most part, to modify expensive. The remaining phrase is unclear in the transcript.