Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, when I was a child I had a gift from my parents and it was a bike.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Well, not really, since nowadays public transports are not bikes, people like to choose others, such as trains, taxis, buses.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 68.0

Sugestão: 回答直接,但“had a gift from my parents”表达不自然,建议说“my parents gave me a bike”或“my parents bought me a bike”。可以补充一个具体细节,例如你多大时收到自行车,或当时如何使用它。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: 先明确回答自行车是否流行,再说明原因。“public transports are not bikes”逻辑和表达都不自然;可用“public transport is more convenient”解释人们为什么选择其他交通方式。注意“public transport”通常不可数,列举交通工具时可说“trains, buses and taxis”。

Exemplo: Not as much as they used to be. Public transport is more convenient in many cities, so people often take the bus or train instead of riding a bike. However, bikes are still popular for exercise and short trips.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× Well, not really, since nowadays public transports are not bikes, people like to choose others, such as trains, taxis, buses.

✓ Well, not really. Nowadays, people tend to choose other forms of transport, such as trains, taxis, and buses, rather than bikes.

“Transport”通常作不可数名词,表示“交通运输”时一般不加 -s。如果要表达不同的交通方式,可以说“forms of transport”。原句中的“public transports”不自然;改成“other forms of transport”后,单复数形式也更清楚。

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