Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答切题，也提供了年龄这一具体信息。但开头时态错误（应使用过去时），并且“learn how to...”重复，影响流畅度。先直接回答，再用一句话补充学车的经历；注意过去时表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bicycle when I was eight, and that was when I learned how to ride.

Sugestão: 回答了自行车在中国很受欢迎，并提到共享单车这一相关例子。不过，“as we all know that”表达不自然；“shared bike”和“it”应改为复数形式，句尾也需要补全。可说明人们如何使用共享单车，让回答更完整。

Exemplo: Yes, I think they’re very popular in China. You can see shared bikes on many streets, and people can rent them easily for short trips around the city.

× Yes, I have my first, uh, I had my first bicycle, uh, when I was 8 years old and it's my first time to learn the how to learn how to ride the bicycle.

✓ Yes, I had my first bicycle when I was eight years old, and it was the first time I learned how to ride a bicycle.

这里描述的是童年时发生的事情，时间背景是过去，所以应使用过去时。原句中的“it's”应改为“it was”；“learned”也与过去的经历保持一致。回答时可删去重复和自我修正的部分，让句子更清晰。

× Yes, I have my first, uh, I had my first bicycle, uh, when I was 8 years old and it's my first time to learn the how to learn how to ride the bicycle.

✓ Yes, I had my first bicycle when I was eight years old, and it was the first time I learned how to ride a bicycle.

这里泛指学习骑自行车，不是指某一辆特定的自行车，因此用“a bicycle”比“the bicycle”合适。另外，“how”前不需要冠词“the”。

× Yes, as we all know that in China there are a lot of, uh, shared bike on the street, so everyone can rent it and, uh, for, for biking.

✓ Yes, as we all know, there are a lot of shared bikes on the streets in China, so everyone can rent them to ride.

“As we all know”本身已经是完整的引导语，后面不应再加“that”。可以说“As we all know, ...”，也可以说“We all know that ...”，不要混用这两种结构。

× Yes, as we all know that in China there are a lot of, uh, shared bike on the street, so everyone can rent it and, uh, for, for biking.

✓ Yes, as we all know, there are a lot of shared bikes on the streets in China, so everyone can rent them to ride.

“a lot of”后面接可数名词时，名词通常要用复数。“bike”是可数名词，因此应改为“bikes”。

× Yes, as we all know that in China there are a lot of, uh, shared bike on the street, so everyone can rent it and, uh, for, for biking.

✓ Yes, as we all know, there are a lot of shared bikes on the streets in China, so everyone can rent them to ride.

前面说的是复数“bikes”，后面指代这些自行车时应使用复数宾格“them”，而不能用单数“it”。

× Yes, as we all know that in China there are a lot of, uh, shared bike on the street, so everyone can rent it and, uh, for, for biking.

✓ Yes, as we all know, there are a lot of shared bikes on the streets in China, so everyone can rent them to ride.

原句中的“rent it and ... for biking”结构不完整，“and”后没有与“rent”并列的完整动词结构。可改为“rent them to ride”，用“to ride”说明租车的目的。