Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Uh-huh.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, in my country bag is very popular because I'm living in village so everybody needs bags.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: Answer with a complete sentence rather than only “Uh-huh.” Add one relevant detail, such as when you got the bike, how often you rode it, or where you rode it.
Exemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 20.0Sugestão: Answer the question about bikes directly; your answer mentions bags instead. Use the plural “bikes,” and give a specific reason or example. Also, say “I live in a village” rather than “I'm living in village.”
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas. Many people use them to travel short distances because they are affordable and easy to park.
× Yes, in my country bag is very popular because I'm living in village so everybody needs bags.
✓ Yes, in my country, bags are very popular because I’m living in a village, so everybody needs bags.
The general noun bag should be plural when referring to bags as a category. Change bag is to bags are to maintain number agreement. The word village also needs an article; use a before the singular countable noun village.
× Yes, in my country bag is very popular because I'm living in village so everybody needs bags.
✓ Yes, in my country, bags are very popular because I’m living in a village, so everybody needs bags.
Village is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a village. Remember that singular countable nouns generally require an article or another determiner.