Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, in my city is very popular and is make the environment better.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 5.0Sugestão: 你重复了考官的问题,没有直接回答。先用“Yes”或“No”明确回应,再补充一两句具体信息,例如自行车的颜色、用途,或你小时候骑车的感受。避免照搬问题。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around the park with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 38.0Sugestão: 你表达了肯定观点和环保理由,但语法需要修改:“bikes”是复数,应用“they are”;“is make”应改为“help make”或“make”。此外,问题询问整个国家,不要只谈你的城市;可以补充一个具体原因或例子,并用连接词衔接。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. They’re convenient for short trips, and they help reduce traffic and air pollution.
× Yes, in my city is very popular and is make the environment better.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my city, and they make the environment better.
第一部分缺少主语,读者不清楚“很受欢迎”的是什么。可以补上主语“bikes”。此外,后半句也需要明确主语;用“they”指代“bikes”,句子结构会更完整。
× Yes, in my city is very popular and is make the environment better.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my city, and they make the environment better.
“is make”不是正确的动词形式。表达一般事实时,应使用一般现在时:主语“they”(指代复数“bikes”)后接动词原形“make”,不需要加“is”。