Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give a clear and relevant reason. Use “a child” rather than “child,” and explain whether you were too young to ride or your family did not have a bike. Avoid the vague phrase “at the time I was small.”

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was too young to ride one. I learned to ride a bike a few years later.

Sugestão: Use the plural form “bikes,” and replace the unclear phrase about the size of the roads with a specific reason. For example, explain that bikes are convenient in busy cities or on narrow streets. Add a supporting detail and avoid repeating “the size.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. They’re convenient for short trips because they’re easy to park and can get through narrow streets more easily than cars.

× No, when I was child I didn't have a bike because at the time I was small.

✓ No, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike because at the time I was small.

The singular countable noun child needs an article. Use a before child when referring to someone during childhood.

× Yes, I think bike are popular in my country as they are faster and convenient according to the size of my the size of the road in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country as they are faster and convenient according to the size of my the size of the road in my country.

The plural verb are indicates that the subject should be plural. Change bike to bikes when speaking about bicycles in general.

× Yes, I think bike are popular in my country as they are faster and convenient according to the size of my the size of the road in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country as they are faster and convenient according to the size of the roads in my country.

The phrase the size of my the size repeats the same construction and makes the sentence ungrammatical. Remove the repeated words. Use roads if referring to roads in the country generally.