Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 子どもの頃について聞かれているため、現在形の「I have」ではなく過去形の「I had」を使いましょう。「When I watch」は文として成立しておらず、言いたい内容が伝わりません。質問に直接答えたあと、誰とどこへ乗って行ったかを過去形で説明すると、自然で具体的な回答になります。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I sometimes rode it to the supermarket with my mother, and I really enjoyed those trips.

Sugestão: 自転車そのものが人気かどうかを答える質問なので、「bikeways」（自転車道）ではなく「bikes」や「cycling」を使いましょう。また、「I see usually around the people」の語順は不自然です。「I usually see people riding bicycles」のように、副詞の位置と表現を整えましょう。自転車に乗る人をよく見かける場所を加えると、回答がより具体的になります。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them in parks and along the roads, especially on weekends.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about having a bike during childhood, so use the past-tense form had rather than have.

× When I watch. I ride my bike with my mother to the supermarket sometimes.

✓ When I was a child, I rode my bike with my mother to the supermarket sometimes.

When I watch is an incomplete dependent clause and does not express a complete idea in this context. Connect the time clause to a main clause, and use a comma after the introductory clause.

× I ride my bike with my mother to the supermarket sometimes.

✓ I rode my bike with my mother to the supermarket sometimes.

The student is describing a past childhood habit, so use the past-tense verb rode instead of the present-tense verb ride.

× I see usually around the people riding bicycles.

✓ I usually see people riding bicycles around.

Usually should generally come before the main verb see. Place around after the object phrase people riding bicycles to make the adverb placement more natural.