Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and clarify whether you had your own bike or shared your brother’s. Use the past tense consistently (for example, “had” and “went”), and avoid restarting or leaving your final thought unfinished. Add one clear memory with a linking phrase such as “When we rode together…”

Exemplo: I didn’t have a bike of my own, but my brother had one. It was black and red, and I sometimes rode with him. We would go to nearby restaurants or the cinema, which I really enjoyed.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion, then support it with a specific reason or example. Replace vague phrases such as “love to enjoy” and “part of their show” with natural expressions like “enjoy riding” and “show off their skills.” Use correct agreement and complete your final idea: “competitions are held,” “my cousin participated,” and “it was exciting.”

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially among young people. Many enjoy riding them and showing off their skills. There are also local competitions; my cousin took part in one, and I went to watch. It was exciting to see the riders compete.

× I don't think so because, uh, during my childhood, I'm a person who is more into bicycle, but I think my brother has one of it

✓ I don't think so because, during my childhood, I was more into bicycles, but I think my brother had one.

The answer refers to childhood, a period in the past, so was and had are appropriate instead of the present-tense forms am and has. Use the plural bicycles when speaking generally. Since the sentence refers to one bike, say had one rather than has one of it.

× during my childhood, I'm a person who is more into bicycle

✓ During my childhood, I was more into bicycles.

Bicycle is a countable noun. When referring to bicycles as a general interest, use the plural form bicycles. You can also make the sentence more concise by saying I was more into bicycles.

× and the color was, I think it's black, red.

✓ And the color was, I think, black and red.

The sentence describes the bike in the past, so use the past-tense form was rather than the present-tense form is. Use and to connect the two colors.

× And we have went to restaurants, cinema hall for shopping, uh, and all.

✓ And we went to restaurants and cinema halls for shopping and other activities.

The speaker is describing completed events from childhood, so the simple past went is appropriate. Have went is incorrect because have requires the past participle gone; in this context, went is the clearer choice. Use cinema halls in the plural to match the general list.

× And we have went to restaurants, cinema hall for shopping, uh, and all.

✓ And we went to restaurants and cinema halls for shopping and other activities.

Cinema hall is countable, and the sentence refers to visits to cinemas in general, so use the plural form cinema halls.

× And I love I really.

✓ And I really loved it.

The original has an incomplete, disorganized clause: love is followed by I really without a clear sentence structure. Put the adverb before the verb and include an object to complete the thought. Because the answer describes a past experience, loved is appropriate.

× All the youngsters are more into it than the older ones because youngsters love to enjoy.

✓ All the youngsters are more into them than the older ones because youngsters love to enjoy riding them.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use them to agree with bikes. Adding riding makes clear what the youngsters enjoy.

× And I think there are many competitions in my country which has been held.

✓ And I think there are many competitions in my country which have been held.

The relative pronoun which refers to the plural noun competitions, so the verb must also be plural: have, not has.

× And one of my cousin was participating in that

✓ And one of my cousins participated in it.

After one of, use a plural noun: cousins. The phrase refers to one person from a group of cousins. Use it to refer clearly to the competition, and the simple past participated fits the account of a past event.