Bike— Part 1 Relatório

PráticaPart12026-10-25 16:48:19

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yes, bikes are popular in our country. In fact, many children as low as 3 years old owned by bicycles. When I was a child, I used a rundown bicycle, which was not supposed to be appropriate for my age, but I rode it anyway and I had fun.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 82.0

Sugestão: Your answer responds directly, but “did have” adds unnecessary emphasis unless you are contrasting it with something. Add one specific detail about the bike or how you used it to make your response more engaging.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a little old, but I rode it around my neighborhood almost every weekend.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 68.0

Sugestão: You give a relevant personal example, but correct the grammar in “children as low as 3 years old owned by bicycles”: say “children as young as three own bicycles.” Keep the answer focused and use a linking phrase to connect the general point to your childhood experience. “Rundown” is natural, but clarify what made the bike unsuitable for your age if relevant.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. In fact, children as young as three often have bicycles. When I was a child, I rode an old bike that was a bit too big for me, but I still had a lot of fun.

Gramática

21: Incorrect passive voice

× In fact, many children as low as 3 years old owned by bicycles.

✓ In fact, many children as young as 3 years old own bicycles.

The phrase owned by bicycles incorrectly uses the passive voice and suggests that bicycles own the children. Use own in the active voice because the children possess the bicycles. Since this describes a general fact, use the present-tense verb own. For ages, say as young as 3 years old rather than as low as 3 years old.

Vocabulário

Fun— Merriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
Low— Short; Cheap; Scarce; Inferior; Humble
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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