Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, when I was a child my mother gave me a bike as a birthday gift.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yes, have many people by bike in support because. This can make people healthy.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 82.0

Sugestão: 回答直接且语法基本正确。可以补充一两处具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、你骑车的地点,或你当时的感受,让答案更生动;注意控制在五句话以内。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me for my birthday when I was about seven. It was a bright red bike, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 35.0

Sugestão: 目前句子存在明显的语法和表达问题,“have many people by bike in support because”无法清楚表达意思。可以先直接回答“Bikes are quite popular”,再说明人们骑车的原因,并使用完整句子和连接词,例如“because”连接原因。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are convenient and affordable. They are also a good way to stay healthy.

Gramática

3: There be issue

× Yes, have many people by bike in support because.

✓ Yes, many people ride bikes because they want to stay healthy.

这里的“have many people”不能用来表达“有很多人”。表达某处“有……”时应使用“There are many people...”;也可以像修改句一样,让“many people”直接作主语。“because”后面还需要接完整的原因从句,不能单独放在句末。

Vocabulário

Healthy— Well; Health-giving
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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