Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I had a bike when I was 10. It was a gift from my parents and I loved riding it around my neighborhood every afternoon because it made me feel free and independent.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, bikes are popular in my country because no matter what age you are they like take lights, exercise.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 88.0Sugestão: 回答直接、内容具体,也说明了骑车带给你的感受。可以把 “when I was 10” 改为更自然的 “when I was ten years old”,并精简句子,让表达更口语、流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was ten years old. My parents gave it to me as a present, and I rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon. I loved the sense of freedom it gave me.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 42.0Sugestão: 你直接回答了问题,但后半句语法和意思不清楚。注意使用正确句型,例如 “people of all ages like riding bikes”;另外,补充具体原因,如骑车可以锻炼身体、通勤或节省费用。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. People of all ages ride them because cycling is a convenient way to get around and also provides good exercise. In busy cities, bikes can help people avoid traffic.
× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because no matter what age you are they like take lights, exercise.
✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because people of all ages like riding them for transportation and exercise.
“Like”后面可以接动名词(动词-ing形式)或“to do”结构,但不能直接接动词原形,因此不能说“like take”。可以说“like taking”或“like to take”。这里改为“like riding them”,表示“喜欢骑自行车”。