Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly and clarify whether you mean a bicycle or a motorbike, since “bike” can refer to either. Avoid restarting phrases and repeated words. Give one clear reason, using a linking word such as “because,” and make the tense consistent when describing your childhood.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a motorbike when I was a child, but I did have a bicycle. I couldn’t ride it very often because my parents were quite strict and rarely let me go out on my own.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, then support it with a specific reason or example. Replace repeated intensifiers such as “very, very” with more natural vocabulary, and use “models” rather than “variants” here. Finish your final sentence with a complete idea.

Exemplo: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country, especially among people who commute or enjoy long rides. There are many models to choose from, and I particularly like Royal Enfield bikes because they look stylish and have a distinctive sound. I’d love to own one someday.

× No, I in my childhood I generally used to have one cycle with me, not bike, because my friend my parents are very strict and they do not allow me to go outside in, in in a in a day in in a daily basis.

✓ No, during my childhood, I generally used to have a bicycle with me, not a bike, because my parents were very strict and did not allow me to go outside on a daily basis.

The sentence contains repeated words and incomplete false starts, including I in my childhood I and my friend my parents. These make the sentence structure unclear. Remove the false starts and use one clear subject and clause. The correction also retains the intended contrast between a bicycle and a bike.

× No, I in my childhood I generally used to have one cycle with me, not bike, because my friend my parents are very strict and they do not allow me to go outside in, in in a in a day in in a daily basis.

✓ No, during my childhood, I generally used to have a bicycle with me, not a bike, because my parents were very strict and did not allow me to go outside on a daily basis.

The answer refers to childhood, a past period, so the past-tense forms were and did not allow are appropriate. Used to already expresses a past habit.

× No, I in my childhood I generally used to have one cycle with me, not bike, because my friend my parents are very strict and they do not allow me to go outside in, in in a in a day in in a daily basis.

✓ No, during my childhood, I generally used to have a bicycle with me, not a bike, because my parents were very strict and did not allow me to go outside on a daily basis.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article in this sentence: not a bike. Singular countable nouns generally cannot be used without an article or another determiner.

× No, I in my childhood I generally used to have one cycle with me, not bike, because my friend my parents are very strict and they do not allow me to go outside in, in in a in a day in in a daily basis.

✓ No, during my childhood, I generally used to have a bicycle with me, not a bike, because my parents were very strict and did not allow me to go outside on a daily basis.

The standard expression is on a daily basis, not in a daily basis. Use on in this fixed phrase.

× And yeah, I want to have a bike in my.

✓ And yeah, I want to have a bike of my own.

The phrase in my is incomplete because my needs to be followed by a noun. The correction expresses a complete idea with of my own. If you intended to name a specific place or time, add the missing noun or phrase instead.