Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly, then add one clear detail about how often you rode the bike or where you went. Use past-tense verbs consistently: say “had” and “rode,” not “have” and “ride.” Also, use “rode it to school”; “write it” has a different meaning. Keep the answer to one or two natural sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a teenager. I rode it to school almost every day, and I sometimes used it to visit my friends.

Sugestão: Give your opinion directly in the present tense, then support it with a specific reason or example. Avoid fillers and repeated or unfinished phrases. Correct the grammar by saying “Myanmar is not a very wealthy country,” “when we were children,” and “friends.” Use a linking phrase such as “For example” to make your supporting detail clear.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Myanmar. They’re an affordable way to get around, and many children enjoy riding them with their friends after school.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a teenager I ride it every day a week and after that I write it to my school.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a teenager. I rode it every day of the week, and after that, I rode it to my school.

The events happened when you were a teenager, so use past-tense verbs: had and rode. If you mean that you traveled to school by bike, use rode, not write.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a teenager I ride it every day a week and after that I write it to my school.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a teenager. I rode it every day of the week, and after that, I rode it to my school.

The phrase every day a week is missing the preposition of. Say every day of the week. Learn common time expressions as complete phrases, such as once a week and every day of the week.

× Yeah, I thought so because, uh, my country is Myanmar and that is not very rich country, but we, when I, when we was a child, we loved to ride the bike, go out and hang out with friend.

✓ Yeah, I think so because, uh, my country is Myanmar, and it is not a very rich country. When we were children, we loved to ride bikes, go out, and hang out with friends.

The question asks for your current opinion, so I think so is more appropriate than I thought so. Use the present simple to express what you think now.

× Yeah, I thought so because, uh, my country is Myanmar and that is not very rich country, but we, when I, when we was a child, we loved to ride the bike, go out and hang out with friend.

✓ Yeah, I think so because, uh, my country is Myanmar, and it is not a very rich country. When we were children, we loved to ride bikes, go out, and hang out with friends.

Country is a singular countable noun here, so it needs an article. Say not a very rich country. Remember to use a or an before a singular countable noun when referring to it generally.

× Yeah, I thought so because, uh, my country is Myanmar and that is not very rich country, but we, when I, when we was a child, we loved to ride the bike, go out and hang out with friend.

✓ Yeah, I think so because, uh, my country is Myanmar, and it is not a very rich country. When we were children, we loved to ride bikes, go out, and hang out with friends.

We is plural, so it must take were, not was. Match the verb to its subject: I was, but we were.

× Yeah, I thought so because, uh, my country is Myanmar and that is not very rich country, but we, when I, when we was a child, we loved to ride the bike, go out and hang out with friend.

✓ Yeah, I think so because, uh, my country is Myanmar, and it is not a very rich country. When we were children, we loved to ride bikes, go out, and hang out with friends.

When talking about multiple people, use the plural noun friends rather than friend. Bikes is also natural when speaking generally about the activity. Check whether a noun refers to one item or more than one, and use the appropriate singular or plural form.