Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I have a bike in my child.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
I don't think bikes are popular in my country because in my country there are some motorcycle on the road. It is so dangerous ride bike on the road.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答直接,但时态和表达不准确。“小时候有”应使用一般过去时“had”,而“in my child”应改为“when I was a child”。可以补充一个具体细节,例如自行车的颜色或你通常骑车做什么。
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 你表达了明确观点和理由,但“in my country”重复较多;“some motorcycle”应改为“many motorcycles”,且“dangerous ride”应改为“dangerous to ride”。建议用连接词把原因说得更自然,并补充具体说明,例如道路交通繁忙或骑行空间不足。
Exemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country, mainly because the roads are crowded with motorcycles and cars. As a result, cycling can feel unsafe, especially in busy areas.
× Yes, I have a bike in my child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
问题问的是你小时候的经历,因此应使用一般过去时。将“have”改为“had”,将“am”改为“was”。回答过去的经历时,注意保持时态一致。
× Yes, I have a bike in my child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
“in my child”不能表达“在我小时候”。应使用“when I was a child”。描述自己小时候的情况时,可以使用“when I was a child”或“as a child”。
× I don't think bikes are popular in my country because in my country there are some motorcycle on the road.
✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because there are some motorcycles on the road.
“some”后面应接可数名词复数,因此“motorcycle”应改为“motorcycles”。看到“some”时,要检查后面的可数名词是否使用复数形式。
× It is so dangerous ride bike on the road.
✓ It is so dangerous to ride a bike on the road.
“It is + 形容词”后接动词表示“做某事是……的”时,动词前通常需要加“to”,所以应说“dangerous to ride”。可以记住结构“It is + adjective + to do something”。
× It is so dangerous ride bike on the road.
✓ It is so dangerous to ride a bike on the road.
“bike”是可数名词单数,泛指骑一辆自行车时,通常需要加冠词“a”,所以应说“a bike”。可数名词单数前一般不能直接省略冠词。