Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and clarify whether you owned a bike. Use the past tense (“didn’t allow”) and avoid repeating or restarting phrases. If you mean you had a common type of bicycle, explain that clearly and add one relevant detail.

Exemplo: Not really. My parents didn’t allow me to have a bike when I was little, although I sometimes borrowed one from a friend. It was a simple bike, like the ones many children had at the time.

Sugestão: Give a clear reason for your opinion, then support it with a specific example. Use correct subject–verb agreement (“people like”) and natural phrasing such as “spend money on bikes.” Avoid repeating “trendy,” and replace the unclear phrase “have a lot of natural” with a precise description.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people buy them for commuting because they are affordable and convenient in busy cities. Mountain bikes and electric bikes are especially fashionable at the moment.

× When I was a child my parents do not allow me to have a bike but I had a bicycle that that children, uh, that mostly children have

✓ When I was a child, my parents did not allow me to have a bike, but I had a bicycle that most children have.

The sentence describes a past situation, so use the past form did not allow rather than do not allow. After did, the main verb stays in its base form: allow. Use most children instead of mostly children to mean the majority of children.

× Yes bikes are really popular in my country as various people likes to invest their money on bikes and because of the trends of bikes and all the people buy different types of bikes and that are trendy and have a lot of natural

✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country, as various people like to invest their money on bikes, and people buy different types of bikes that are trendy.

The subject people is plural, so it must take the plural verb like, not likes. In the corrected version, bikes is also the plural noun referred to by that, so the relative clause uses are. The original ending is unclear and incomplete, so it has been omitted rather than guessed.