Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题，并注意过去时：描述童年时应使用“had”，而不是“have”。避免重复同一句话；可以补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点或用途。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school.

Sugestão: 观点明确，但有多处语法和搭配问题：“very very speed”应改为“very fast”或“efficient”，“it not everyone have”应改为“not everyone has”。列举公共交通后，用“so”解释结果即可，不必重复“不太流行”；也可以补充一个具体原因或对比。

Exemplo: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Public transport is fast and convenient, especially the buses and the underground, so many people prefer using it to cycling.

× I have a bike, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时的情况，且有明确的过去时间 when I was a child，因此应使用一般过去时 had，而不是一般现在时 have。

× No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because we have very very speed public transportation.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because we have very fast public transportation.

speed 是名词，不能直接用来修饰 public transportation。这里需要形容词 fast 来描述公共交通的速度。

× For example, the bus, the underground and so on so it not everyone have bike.

✓ For example, we have buses, the underground, and so on, so not everyone has a bike.

原句中的 so it not everyone have bike 结构不完整，it 在这里多余，且 so 前后的内容需要组成清晰、完整的句子。可以改为 so not everyone has a bike，表达“所以并不是每个人都有自行车”。

× For example, the bus, the underground and so on so it not everyone have bike.

✓ For example, we have buses, the underground, and so on, so not everyone has a bike.

everyone 虽然表示“每个人”，但语法上作单数看待，因此一般现在时中动词要用第三人称单数形式 has，而不是 have。

× For example, the bus, the underground and so on so it not everyone have bike.

✓ For example, we have buses, the underground, and so on, so not everyone has a bike.

bike 是可数名词单数，前面需要限定词。这里应在 bike 前加不定冠词 a，构成 a bike。

× So bike is not very popular.

✓ So bikes are not very popular.

这里泛指自行车这一类交通工具，使用复数 bikes 更自然。主语改为复数后，be 动词也应使用 are。