Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly, then add one clear supporting detail. Check past-tense grammar: use “when I was a child” and “I had,” rather than “when I were” and “I have.” Use “I really liked it” and explain naturally how cycling helped you relax or spend time with friends.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I really enjoyed riding it with my friends because it helped me relax and spend time outdoors.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer about your country, then support it with a specific example. Use the plural “bikes” and connect your ideas with a linking word such as “for example” or “because.” Clarify the place you mention so the example is easy to understand.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, I often see people riding them in parks and along busy streets in my city.

× Yes, when I were a giol's, I have a bike with my friends. I very like this because this is have me relaxing and hang out with my friend

✓ Yes, when I was a girl, I had a bike and rode it with my friends. I really liked it because it helped me relax and hang out with my friends.

The subject I takes was, not were, in the past tense. Match the verb to its subject: say I was.

× Yes, when I were a giol's, I have a bike with my friends. I very like this because this is have me relaxing and hang out with my friend

✓ Yes, when I was a girl, I had a bike and rode it with my friends. I really liked it because it helped me relax and hang out with my friends.

The question asks about childhood, so use the past tense for past experiences: had, liked, and helped. Keep the verbs in a list in the same tense.

× Yes, when I were a giol's, I have a bike with my friends. I very like this because this is have me relaxing and hang out with my friend

✓ Yes, when I was a girl, I had a bike and rode it with my friends. I really liked it because it helped me relax and hang out with my friends.

Very does not normally modify the verb like. Use really to modify liked: I really liked it. Remember that adverbs such as really can modify verbs.

× Yes, when I were a giol's, I have a bike with my friends. I very like this because this is have me relaxing and hang out with my friend

✓ Yes, when I was a girl, I had a bike and rode it with my friends. I really liked it because it helped me relax and hang out with my friends.

The phrase this is have me relaxing does not form a correct verb structure. Use helped me relax. After help, use the base form of the verb, as in helped me relax and hang out.

× I think bike are popular in my Hojim city I see more bike riding by in the Laga Rose in Hojim City

✓ I think bikes are popular in Hojim City. I see more people riding bikes in Laga Rose in Hojim City.

Use the plural form bikes when speaking generally about bicycles. Also use bikes after more when referring to multiple bicycles. Add an s to regular plural nouns.

× I think bike are popular in my Hojim city I see more bike riding by in the Laga Rose in Hojim City

✓ I think bikes are popular in Hojim City. I see more people riding bikes in Laga Rose in Hojim City.

The original combines two complete thoughts without suitable punctuation, and more bike riding by is not a clear sentence structure. Separate the thoughts with a period and use a clear subject and verb, such as people riding bikes.