Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответьте прямо, затем объясните, почему перестали ездить. Исправьте «fraid» на «afraid» и замените неестественное «soon after some months» на «after a few months». Для прошлого используйте «were afraid of riding it», а вместо «resell it» естественнее сказать «sell it».

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike as a child, but I was afraid of riding it. After a few months, my parents sold it because I hardly ever used it.

Sugestão: Ответ в целом раскрывает тему и содержит сравнение сезонов. Исправьте «a easy» на «an easy» и используйте более естественное «get to work or university». Во второй части укажите, кто пользуется автобусами и автомобилями: например, «people mostly use buses or cars». Свяжите контраст словом «however».

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re an easy and affordable way to get to work or university. However, people tend to cycle mainly in summer. In winter, most people rely on buses or cars because the weather is cold.

× I had a bike when I was a child, but I was really fraid about riding it soon after some months my parents decided to resell it, so now I don't have a bike

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, but I was really afraid of riding it. After a few months, my parents decided to resell it, so now I don't have a bike.

The adjective afraid is followed by the preposition of, not about, when describing fear of an activity. Use afraid of + a noun or an -ing form, as in afraid of riding.

× I think bikes are really popular in my country because it's a easy way to come to work or university, but it's popular only in the summer.

✓ I think bikes are really popular in my country because it's an easy way to get to work or university, but it's popular only in the summer.

Use an before a word that begins with a vowel sound. Easy begins with a vowel sound, so the correct phrase is an easy way.

× I think bikes are really popular in my country because it's a easy way to come to work or university, but it's popular only in the summer.

✓ I think bikes are really popular in my country because it's an easy way to get to work or university, but they are popular only in the summer.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers here to bikes, which is plural. Use they to refer to bikes. Use they are with this plural pronoun.

× So in winter mostly used buses or cars.

✓ So in winter, people mostly use buses or cars.

The original clause has no subject, so it is incomplete. Add a subject such as people and use the present-tense verb use to describe a general habit.