Bike— Part 1 Relatório

PráticaPart12026-10-22 15:14:31

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

I had a bike when I was a child. You know, at that time, my mom always taught me how to road a bike around my neighborhood and she always let me go, let me let myself run.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yes they are. Bikes are really popular in my country because near the course along the road you can see many colorful bikes for public use and it's really good transportation to protect the environment.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题,再补充一个具体细节。注意应说“ride a bike”,不能说“road a bike”。“she always let me go, let me let myself run”表达不清楚,可以改为“she let me ride around the neighborhood on my own”。避免重复使用“always”,并用“when I was learning”或“once I learned”让时间关系更清晰。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My mother taught me how to ride a bike in our neighborhood, and once I got the hang of it, she let me ride around on my own.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 58.0

Sugestão: 回答切题,也给出了公共自行车这一具体例子,但“near the course along the road”不自然,建议直接说“along the roads”或“around the city”。“transportation to protect the environment”可改为“an environmentally friendly way to get around”。补充一个具体用途,例如短途通勤,能让理由更充分。

Exemplo: Yes, they are quite popular. You can see brightly coloured shared bikes along many roads, especially in city centres. They’re a convenient and environmentally friendly way to travel short distances.

Gramática

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× my mom always taught me how to road a bike around my neighborhood

✓ My mom always taught me how to ride a bike around my neighborhood.

“how to”后面应接动词原形。这里要表达“骑自行车”,应使用动词“ride”,而不是“road”。建议记住固定搭配“ride a bike”(骑自行车)。

Vocabulário

Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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