Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充一两个具体细节。注意这里应是“bike”，不是“bag”；“骑车上学”可说“rode my bike to school”，“让我感到放松”可说“helped me relax”。原回答有句子粘连，可用 because 或 and 连接，并避免重复表达喜爱。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a small blue bike when I was a child, and I loved it. I often rode it to school by myself, which was a fun and relaxing way to start the day.

Sugestão: 明确表达你的判断，不要以“I'm not sure”开头后又给出不清楚的结论。注意说“most people”，而不是“most of people”；“sometimes”不需要加“in”，“some back”应改为“some bikes”。可以比较城市交通方式，并补充一个具体观察，让回答更连贯。

Exemplo: I think bikes are fairly popular, although it depends on the area. In busy cities, many people take the subway or drive to work, but I still see people cycling in parks and quieter neighbourhoods. They often use bikes for exercise or short trips.

× Of course, my mother bought a bag for me when I was a child it's very cute and I love it so much.

✓ Of course, my mother bought a bag for me when I was a child. It's very cute, and I love it so much.

原句中“when I was a child”之后直接连接了两个完整句子，造成句子粘连。应在“child”后用句号分开，或使用合适的连接词连接。

× I'm not sure in our country, most of people go for work or school by car or subway.

✓ I'm not sure, but in our country, most people go for work or school by car or subway.

“most of people”中的“most of”后通常需要限定词，如“most of the people”；如果后面直接接普通复数名词，应使用“most people”。这里改为“most people”更自然。

× I'm not sure in our country, most of people go for work or school by car or subway.

✓ I'm not sure, but in our country, most of people go to work or school by car or subway.

表达“去上班”时通常说“go to work”，而不是“go for work”。因此应将“for”改为“to”。

× In sometimes I can see some back but not often

✓ Sometimes I can see some back but not often.

“sometimes”本身是频率副词，前面不需要加介词“in”。应直接用“Sometimes”放在句首。