Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答童年经历时要使用过去时，例如用“I had”代替“I do have”，用“as I grew older”描述成长过程。注意表达“车子对我来说变得太小”时可说“it became too small for me”。最后可以补充一个具体细节，比如你骑车的地点或感受，让回答更完整。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a small yellow bike when I was a child. As I grew older, it became too small for me, so I eventually stopped using it. I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

Sugestão: 先直接回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用清晰、准确的理由或例子展开。避免使用不自然的“every time there are thousands of bikes”；可以说街上有很多自行车或电动自行车。“those bike runs on electronic”表达不清，可改为“many of them are electric bikes”。注意主谓一致，并说明这些车通常在哪里或为什么受欢迎。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in busy cities. You can see many bicycles and electric bikes on the streets, because they are convenient and relatively inexpensive. People often use them for short trips to work or school.

× I do have a bike.

✓ I had a bike.

考官问的是你小时候是否有自行车，问题使用过去时“Did you have…”。回答也应使用过去时“had”，而不是表示现在拥有的“do have”。

× It was a small yellow bike and as I grow up is getting smaller for me, so it has been abandoned.

✓ It was a small yellow bike, and as I grew up, it got smaller for me, so it has been abandoned.

这句话是在描述过去的自行车以及随着说话者长大而发生的变化，因此应将“grow”改为过去式“grew”，并将“is getting”改为“got”。“has been abandoned”是现在完成时的被动结构，可以保留。

× Yes, of course every time there are thousands of bikes and those bike runs on electronic and all over the streets

✓ Yes, of course, every time there are thousands of bikes and those bikes run on electronic and all over the streets.

“those”指多个对象，后面的可数名词“bike”应使用复数形式“bikes”。看到“those”“these”或具体数量时，要检查后面的可数名词是否需要变为复数。

× Yes, of course every time there are thousands of bikes and those bike runs on electronic and all over the streets

✓ Yes, of course, every time there are thousands of bikes and those bike run on electronic and all over the streets.

“those bike”表示复数主语，因此谓语动词不能使用第三人称单数形式“runs”，应改为“run”。注意主语是复数时，动词通常使用原形。

× Yes, of course every time there are thousands of bikes and those bike runs on electronic and all over the streets

✓ Yes, of course, every time there are thousands of bikes and those bikes run on electronic and are all over the streets.

“and all over the streets”后面缺少谓语，导致这一部分没有完整表达“自行车遍布街道”的意思。可补上“are”，构成“are all over the streets”。