Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题，再用一两句补充自行车的颜色、购买者和你的感受。注意时态和语法：说“when I was a child”，不要说“when I were a child”；表达过去发生的事时用过去式，例如“bought”和“was”。检查容易混淆的词，应该是“bike”，不是“back”。避免重复或不完整的句子。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red, and my father bought it for me. I was really excited when I received it, and I rode it around my neighborhood.

Sugestão: 开头直接回答自行车是否受欢迎，并用一个具体原因或例子展开。注意这里应说“bikes”，不是“bags”；“everyone”后面的动词要用“likes”。“In my memories”不自然，可以改为“From what I’ve seen”。最后的“Buy it”与问题无关，可以删掉。还可以补充自行车常见的用途，例如通勤或短途出行。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. From what I’ve seen, many people use them for short trips because they’re convenient and inexpensive. They’re also a great way to get some exercise.

× Yes, I did have a back when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a back when I was a child.

“I”作主语时，be动词的过去式应使用“was”，不能用“were”。可记住过去式搭配：I/he/she/it was；you/we/they were。

× I remember it's a red bike which boat by my which is bought by my father.

✓ I remember it's a red bike which was bought by my father.

这里表示自行车在过去“被父亲买下”，需要使用一般过去时的被动语态：was + 过去分词。原句中的“boat”不是正确的被动结构；应使用“was bought”。

× I really excited and happy to receive this.

✓ I was really excited and happy to receive this.

“excited”和“happy”在这里是形容词，句子需要系动词连接主语“I”和形容词。描述过去的感受时，应加过去式“was”。

× In my memories everyone like their bike.

✓ In my memories everyone likes their bike.

“everyone”虽然指很多人，但语法上属于第三人称单数，因此一般现在时的谓语动词应加“-s”：like → likes。