Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答是否拥有自己的自行车，再说明家里有一辆自行车以及你如何使用它。注意过去的经历要用过去时：用“didn’t have”，而不是“don’t have”；“I were”应改为“I was”。“my house has a bike”不够自然，可说“there was a bike at home”。最后的“practice my ride”表达不自然，可改为“practise riding it”或说明骑车的目的。

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child, but we had one at home that belonged to my dad. I used to ride it with him to practise cycling.

Sugestão: 观点明确，也提到了共享单车和便利性，但要修正表达并让逻辑更清楚。“bike”泛指时通常用复数“bikes”；“share bike”应为“shared bikes”；“write”应为“ride”。“ride it to anywhere”可改为“ride them almost anywhere”。你提到与日本相比不太流行，但这与前面“很受欢迎”之间的关系不清楚；建议解释比较的具体方面，或删去这部分。结尾可说明希望未来更多人骑车通勤。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes, which are easy to find in many cities. They’re a convenient way to travel short distances. However, cycling may be less common here than in Japan, and I hope more people will use bikes for their daily commutes in the future.

× No, I don't have my own bike when I were a child.

✓ No, I didn't have my own bike when I were a child.

这里描述的是童年时期的情况，应使用一般过去时。将“don't have”改为“didn't have”。

× No, I don't have my own bike when I were a child.

✓ No, I don't have my own bike when I was a child.

句子说的是过去，be动词应使用过去式。“I”对应“was”，不能用“were”。

× However, my house has uh, bike.

✓ However, my house had uh, bike.

上下文讨论的是小时候的情况，因此“has”应改为一般过去时“had”。

× However, my house has uh, bike.

✓ However, my house has uh, a bike.

“bike”是单数可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词“a”。结合上下文，完整表达可说“my house had a bike”。

× That was my dad and I usually ride it to practice my ride.

✓ That was my dad and I usually rode it to practice my ride.

句子描述童年时期经常发生的事情，应使用一般过去时，因此“ride”要改为“rode”。

× That was my dad and I usually ride it to practice my ride.

✓ That was my dad and I usually ride it to practice riding.

“practice”后面接动词时，动词通常使用-ing形式。因此应说“practice riding”，而不是“practice my ride”。

× Yes, I think bike is popular in my country because we have the share bike everywhere and everyone can write it to anywhere and it is very convenient.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because we have the share bike everywhere and everyone can write it to anywhere and it is very convenient.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数“bikes”，相应的系动词也应使用“are”。

× Yes, I think bike is popular in my country because we have the share bike everywhere and everyone can write it to anywhere and it is very convenient.

✓ Yes, I think bike is popular in my country because we have the share bikes everywhere and everyone can write it to anywhere and it is very convenient.

“everywhere”表示各处有许多共享单车，因此这里应使用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。

× Yes, I think bike is popular in my country because we have the share bike everywhere and everyone can write it to anywhere and it is very convenient.

✓ Yes, I think bike is popular in my country because we have the share bike everywhere and everyone can write it anywhere and it is very convenient.

“anywhere”本身表示“在任何地方／去任何地方”，前面通常不需要加介词“to”，所以应删除“to”。

× However, compared to the Japan it is not popular and it I hope in the future everyone can write it frequently.

✓ However, compared to Japan it is not popular and it I hope in the future everyone can write it frequently.

国家名称“Japan”前通常不加定冠词“the”，因此应说“compared to Japan”。

× However, compared to the Japan it is not popular and it I hope in the future everyone can write it frequently.

✓ However, compared to the Japan it is not popular, and I hope everyone can write it frequently in the future.

“and it I hope”语序不正确。表达“我希望……”时，应将“I hope”放在从句之前，并把时间状语“in the future”放在句末或从句开头。