Bike— Part 1 Relatório

PráticaPart12026-10-21 18:01:07

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, when I was a dry, I had like two or three bites. Uh, I really enjoy like going by going biking, uh, because I can practice. It's just, I, I consider it just like a means of, of, of, of physical exercise.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yeah, I think Bai is one of the main means of transportation in my country and teenagers especially students in secondary school or high school frequently used by to go to school every day.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 52.0

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có bổ sung lý do đạp xe, nhưng câu trả lời có nhiều từ đệm và lặp từ như “like”, “uh” và “of”. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán khi kể về thời thơ ấu, nói rõ bạn có bao nhiêu chiếc xe và diễn đạt lý do tự nhiên hơn, chẳng hạn “I used to ride my bike for exercise.”

Exemplo: Yes, I had two or three bikes when I was a child. I enjoyed riding them around my neighborhood, and it was a fun way to get some exercise.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 62.0

Sugestão: Bạn đưa ra nhận định rõ ràng và nêu được nhóm người thường đi xe đạp, nhưng cần dùng đúng dạng số nhiều “bikes” và cấu trúc “use bikes to go to school”. Vì đây là câu hỏi về hiện tại, hãy dùng hiện tại đơn (“use”) thay vì quá khứ “used”. Bạn cũng có thể thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về lý do học sinh chọn xe đạp.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among secondary school and high school students. Many of them ride to school because it’s affordable and convenient for short distances.

Gramática

26: Sentence structure errors

× I really enjoy like going by going biking.

✓ I really enjoy biking.

The phrase going by going is an incorrect, repetitive construction. Use the gerund biking after enjoy, since enjoy is followed by a verb ending in -ing.

1: Singular and plural issue

× I think Bai is one of the main means of transportation in my country.

✓ I think bikes are one of the main means of transportation in my country.

The answer refers to bikes in general, so use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular form bike. The plural noun also requires are.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× I think Bai is one of the main means of transportation in my country.

✓ I think bikes are one of the main means of transportation in my country.

The subject bikes is plural, so it must agree with the plural verb are. In the phrase one of the main means, means remains plural because it refers to several forms of transportation.

21: Incorrect passive voice

× Teenagers especially students in secondary school or high school frequently used by to go to school every day.

✓ Teenagers, especially students in secondary school or high school, frequently use bikes to go to school every day.

The students are the people using the bikes, so the sentence needs an active verb. Used by is an incorrect passive-like construction here; use use bikes instead.

6: Present tense issue

× Teenagers especially students in secondary school or high school frequently used by to go to school every day.

✓ Teenagers, especially students in secondary school or high school, frequently use bikes to go to school every day.

This describes a regular habit, so use the present simple use. Used does not correctly express this habitual present action.

Vocabulário

Dry— Arid; Parched; Thirsty; Dull; Unemotional
High— Tall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
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