Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly, then explain that the bike was shared and why you rarely rode it. Use accurate past-tense and grammar forms: “we shared it,” “I rarely rode,” “I’m not good at balancing,” and “I fell.” Avoid repeating “bike/bicycle,” and split the long run-on answer into shorter sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, we had a bike at home, but the whole family shared it. I rarely rode it because I wasn’t very good at balancing and often fell over. I found it difficult to ride on my own.

Sugestão: Give a clear answer and finish your thought; the response currently ends mid-sentence. Correct the phrasing to “my country is located near the equator” and “riding a bicycle can make people feel sweaty.” Add a specific alternative people use, such as cars or public transport, and connect your ideas without repeating “so.”

Exemplo: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Since it’s near the equator, the weather is hot and humid for much of the year, so cycling can make people feel uncomfortable and sweaty. As a result, many people prefer to travel by car or public transport.

× There was a bike in my house but they shared by every family members but I rarely ride the bike because I'm not good in balancing It is easy for me to fell down when I try to ride the bicycle and also it seems like it's a bit tough for me to ride myself.

✓ There was a bike in my house, but it was shared by every family member. I rarely rode the bike because I'm not good at balancing. It is easy for me to fall down when I try to ride the bicycle, and it also seems a bit tough for me to ride by myself.

The phrase they shared by is missing a passive auxiliary and uses the wrong subject. Since the bike receives the action of sharing, use it was shared. Use was shared by every family member to express that each family member shared the bike.

× There was a bike in my house but they shared by every family members but I rarely ride the bike because I'm not good in balancing It is easy for me to fell down when I try to ride the bicycle and also it seems like it's a bit tough for me to ride myself.

✓ There was a bike in my house, but it was shared by every family member. I rarely rode the bike because I'm not good at balancing. It is easy for me to fall down when I try to ride the bicycle, and it also seems a bit tough for me to ride by myself.

Every is followed by a singular countable noun, so family members should be every family member. Alternatively, you could say all the family members.

× There was a bike in my house but they shared by every family members but I rarely ride the bike because I'm not good in balancing It is easy for me to fell down when I try to ride the bicycle and also it seems like it's a bit tough for me to ride myself.

✓ There was a bike in my house, but it was shared by every family member. I rarely rode the bike because I'm not good at balancing. It is easy for me to fall down when I try to ride the bicycle, and it also seems a bit tough for me to ride by myself.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the past-tense form rode is appropriate instead of ride. After to, use the base form of a verb: fall, not fell. Fell is the simple past form of fall.

× There was a bike in my house but they shared by every family members but I rarely ride the bike because I'm not good in balancing It is easy for me to fell down when I try to ride the bicycle and also it seems like it's a bit tough for me to ride myself.

✓ There was a bike in my house, but it was shared by every family member. I rarely rode the bike because I'm not good at balancing. It is easy for me to fall down when I try to ride the bicycle, and it also seems a bit tough for me to ride by myself.

The natural preposition after good in this expression is at: good at balancing. To say that you ride without help or company, use by myself rather than ride myself.

× I don't think so because my country is It' located on the equator so it doesn't have four seasons that means that it is sunny almost every day.

✓ I don't think so because my country is located on the equator, so it doesn't have four seasons. That means it is sunny almost every day.

The phrase my country is It' located contains an extra, incorrectly placed word. Use my country is located. Separating the long sequence into sentences also makes the relationship between the ideas clear.

× So it will it makes people to feel sweaty if riding bicycle.

✓ So it makes people feel sweaty when they ride a bicycle.

Do not use will together with the present-tense verb makes. Also, after the causative verb makes, use the base verb without to: makes people feel.

× So it will it makes people to feel sweaty if riding bicycle.

✓ So it makes people feel sweaty when they ride a bicycle.

Bicycle is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bicycle when referring to a bicycle in general.