Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答切题，也提供了颜色和用途两个细节。把“where I was a child”改为“when I was a child”；句子之间应使用句号或连接词。“climb the mountain”表达略显生硬，可以说明你骑车去山里或爬坡。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was black, and I often rode it on the hills near my home. I really enjoyed cycling there.

Sugestão: 你直接表达了否定看法，但后面的原因“Like stopways”含义不清，影响理解。请确认想表达的词，例如“subways”（地铁）；同时注意标点、大小写，以及用“on weekends”表达“在周末”。可以补充一个具体原因或例子。

Exemplo: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer taking the subway, especially on weekends, because it is convenient and fast. You can still see cyclists in parks, though.

× Yes, I had a bike where I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

这里是在说明“我小时候”这个时间，因此应使用 when（当……时），而 where 用于表示地点。可以根据句意判断：表达时间用 when，表达地点用 where。

× I think people always Like stopways in the weekend.

✓ I think people always Like stopways on the weekend.

表示“在周末”时，通常使用 on the weekend（尤其在美式英语中），而不是 in the weekend。也可以说 on weekends。