Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题，并统一使用过去时：用“had”和“was”，而不是“have”和“am”。“I have the back”表达不清楚，可以改成“I had a bike”。“long longed”不自然，可用“really wanted”；“because a lot of my peers”是未完成的句子，需要说明同伴的情况。最后补充一个具体细节，例如你如何学会骑车。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mum bought me my first one when I was about ten, and I was really eager to learn how to ride it because many of my friends already could. I remember practising in the park with my dad.

Sugestão: 回答切题，也给出了骑车上学的原因。表达上可将“I will say definitely”简化为“Definitely”或“I’d say they’re definitely”；注意主谓一致和动词形式：“every child knows”“when they enter”，以及“ride a bike”。“几乎每个孩子都会骑车”的说法比较绝对，可以改成“很多孩子”，并补充骑车的实际好处或常见场景。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and students. Many students ride them to school because it’s an affordable and convenient way to travel. You can also see people cycling in parks at the weekend.

× Yeah, I have the back when I'm a child.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，应使用过去时：have 改为 had，am 改为 was。这里按上下文将 back 理解为 bike；bike 是可数名词单数，泛指一辆自行车时应使用 a，而不是 the。

× My mom bought me my first bike when I'm around 10 years old.

✓ My mom bought me my first bike when I was around 10 years old.

句子讲的是过去发生的事情，when 引导的时间从句也应使用过去时。因此，I'm 应改为 I was。

× At that time I'm very long longed to learn how to ride bike because a lot of my peers.

✓ At that time, I really wanted to learn how to ride a bike because many of my peers rode bikes.

At that time 指过去的时间，因此应使用过去时 wanted 和 rode。bike 是可数名词单数，ride 后应加 a。原句 because a lot of my peers 只有主语，没有谓语，句子不完整；应补充 peers 做了什么，例如 rode bikes。

× Basically every child know how to ride bike when they're enter to junior high school because a lot of people ride bike to their school.

✓ Basically, every child knows how to ride a bike when they enter junior high school because a lot of people ride bikes to their school.

every child 表示单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数 knows。ride bike 中 bike 是可数名词，单数时应说 ride a bike；泛指许多人骑车时也可以说 ride bikes。they're enter 的结构错误：enter 前不需要 be 动词，应改为 they enter。此外，enter 后面不加 to，直接说 enter junior high school。