Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你没有回答考官的问题，而是把问题反问给考官。Part 1 应先直接回答“有”或“没有”，再补充一两句具体信息，例如你几岁时学会骑车、在哪里骑，或为什么喜欢骑车。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

Sugestão: 你有直接表达观点，但后面的描述不够清楚，且有明显语法和用词问题：“in the in China”应改为“in China”，“every people”应改为“everyone”或“many people”。“在街上买自行车”和“向你打招呼”与问题的关联不明确。建议说明自行车为什么受欢迎，并用具体场景支持观点；可用“because”“for example”等连接词。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient, and shared bikes are easy to find on the street.

× Yes, they are more popular in the in China and you can see every people buy the bikes in the street and they say hello to you.

✓ Yes, they are more popular in China, and you can see every person buying bikes on the street, and they say hello to you.

“in the in China”中介词和冠词重复。表示“在中国”时直接说“in China”，国家名称前通常不加定冠词“the”。

× Yes, they are more popular in the in China and you can see every people buy the bikes in the street and they say hello to you.

✓ Yes, they are more popular in China, and you can see every person buying bikes on the street, and they say hello to you.

“every”后面要接单数可数名词，因此不能说“every people”。可以改为“every person”，也可以更简洁地说“everyone”。

× Yes, they are more popular in the in China and you can see every people buy the bikes in the street and they say hello to you.

✓ Yes, they are more popular in China, and you can see every person buying bikes on the street, and they say hello to you.

这里泛指人们购买自行车，不是指前文提到的某些特定自行车，因此通常不加定冠词“the”，应说“buy bikes”。表达“在街上”时，“on the street”比“in the street”更自然。