Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, my little bike have 4 wheels.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
If electric bikes can be included. Bags are very popular in our country, but you know, electric bikes often.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 你直接回答了问题,但句子有语法错误:“my little bike have”应改为“my little bike had”。“four wheels”也可以进一步说明这是一辆辅助轮自行车,并补充一个简短细节,让回答更完整自然。
Exemplo: Yes, I had a small bike with four wheels when I was a child. The extra wheels helped me keep my balance while I was learning to ride.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 20.0Sugestão: 回答中有几处表达不清:“Bags”可能是“bikes”的口误;“If electric bikes can be included”不是完整句;结尾“electric bikes often”也没有表达完整意思。建议先直接回答自行车是否受欢迎,再说明你是否把电动自行车也算在内,并给出一个具体原因或例子。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially electric bikes. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and cheaper to run than cars.
× Yes, my little bike have 4 wheels.
✓ Yes, my little bike had 4 wheels.
问题在于动词时态。问题问的是小时候的经历,使用过去时;因此 have 应改为 had。
× If electric bikes can be included.
✓ If electric bikes can be included, they are popular in our country.
以 If 引导的条件从句通常不能单独成句,需要连接一个主句。可以补上主句,说明把电动自行车也算进去时的情况。
× but you know, electric bikes often.
✓ but, you know, electric bikes are often used.
原句缺少谓语动词,结构不完整。可以补上 are often used,构成完整的被动语态句子。