Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I did I hide a bicycle I rode it near my home
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, I do, lots of people read them they are cheap and good for short traps.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 先直接回答问题,再补充一两个具体细节。注意句子之间要用标点或连接词隔开;这里应使用“had a bicycle”,而不是“hide a bicycle”。还可以补充骑车的地点或感受,让回答更完整。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small bicycle when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中已经给出原因,但要注意动词和词语选择:“ride bikes”表示“骑自行车”,“short trips”表示“短途出行”。请用连接词把观点和原因连起来,并补充一个具体场景,例如通勤或购物。
Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people ride them to nearby shops or to work.
× Yes, I did I hide a bicycle I rode it near my home
✓ Yes, I did. I had a bicycle. I rode it near my home.
问题中的 hide 与前面的过去时间语境不一致,而且这里表达“有一辆自行车”应使用 have。have 的过去式是 had。回答过去发生的事情时,注意使用动词的过去式。
× Yes, I do, lots of people read them they are cheap and good for short traps.
✓ Yes, I do. Lots of people read them. They are cheap and good for short traps.
原句把几个可以独立成立的句子直接用逗号或不加标点连接,造成句子结构错误。应使用句号分开完整句子。