Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: إجابتك مباشرة وصحيحة، لكنها قصيرة جدًا ولا تضيف تفاصيل تساعد على استمرار الحديث. أضف جملة توضح نوع الدراجة أو متى كنت تستخدمها، ويمكنك ذكر شعورك أو نشاط كنت تقوم به بها.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Sugestão: إجابتك غير واضحة بسبب أخطاء في تركيب الجمل وكثرة التردد، لذلك يصعب فهم رأيك والأسباب التي تدعمه. ابدأ بإجابة مباشرة، ثم اذكر سببًا واضحًا ومثالًا مناسبًا عن استخدام الدراجات في السعودية. حاول أيضًا استخدام كلمات دقيقة وتجنب تكرار العبارات أو إدخال تفاصيل غير مترابطة.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in Saudi Arabia. Many people enjoy cycling for exercise, and some cities have built dedicated cycling paths. For example, I sometimes see families riding bikes in parks at the weekend.

× Yes, he's now because, uh, he'd in video, Bobby died in Saudi Arabia and uh, uh, very much, uh, very much my friends about it.

✓ Yes, they are popular now because I heard in a video that Bobby died in Saudi Arabia, and my friends and I talk about it a lot.

The pronoun he's refers to a male person, but the question is about bikes, so use they to refer to bikes. The phrase they'd in video is unclear; I have interpreted it as I heard in a video. Use a pronoun that clearly refers to the subject being discussed.

× Yes, he's now because, uh, he'd in video, Bobby died in Saudi Arabia and uh, uh, very much, uh, very much my friends about it.

✓ Yes, they are popular now because I heard in a video that Bobby died in Saudi Arabia, and my friends and I talk about it a lot.

The ending very much my friends about it is an incomplete phrase because it has no verb. Use a complete clause, such as my friends and I talk about it a lot. Also, the phrase I heard in a video that introduces the information heard.